Lost Souls (Collab With Ana)

On a mystic night that was terrifyingly profound
While I sat in the darkness with none around.
As the howling winds whispered with a lullaby sound
I felt your lost soul lurking in the background.

Wild thoughts in my head began to race
In my darkness, I craved the bliss of your grace.
Desperately, I yearned to see your beautiful face
Anxiously! I wanted to feel the warmth of your embrace.

As my imagination escaped my life’s logical shore
I envisioned the glorious moments we shared before.
With my hopeful heart as I opened the door
I was greeted by pain, loneliness & nothing more.

Even tonight as my horrifying hallucination begins to fly
Tears of blood stream down from my eye.
Bitterly I weep, madly I cry
As helplessly I see your illusion burn & die.

But neither the devil below nor the God sitting above
None can corrupt the purity of our love.
For my heart breathes the name of our immortal love
& someday my lost soul shall find you my darling dove.

Perhaps wandering beyond the boundaries of day & night
Surpassing the arguments of wrong & right.
Overcoming the feeling of agony & delight
Someday, my love, our lost souls will again unite.

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Note: True love is magical, it binds two souls in such a way that nothing /none can ever dissever their souls from each other. True lovers may die but the legacy of their love remains immortal.

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37 thoughts on “Lost Souls (Collab With Ana)

    1. Thank you so much for your kind words! Yes i do focus on the image and rhyme in order to connect with readers from all age groups I’m absolutely delighted by your generous feedback πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  1. This reminds me of a story I heard on TV yesterday. A 79-year old man was showing a TV-host around his house. He stopped for a moment to show the host the picture of his wife who had died only one year ago. Two candles were burning beside the picture. The host asked him if he had burned the candles just for the cameras. The man’s reply broke my heart. He said that he burned a candle beside her picture every day so she would always be in the light. He said she was the light of his life and this was his of thanking her for all her love.

    True love is truly magical and your writing is a beautiful reminder!

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    1. Aww that’s a beautiful story and thanks for sharing that with me, it really was a touching story. True love is immortal isn’t it :’)… Yes life can be unpredictable at times but one with embrace it as it comes for every moment promises a blissful miracle in itself. Thank you for kind words for my writing, you are an impressive writer as well. Keep smiling and keep weaving the magic of your delightful words. 😊

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    1. Yes i personally too like rhyming its a thrilling experience to connect words like crosswords to create a phonetic flow. Thank you for your precious feedback 😊

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    1. Thank you I’m glad you liked this poem, rhyming is an integral part of all my poems, i feel that way I can work on improving my flow and get my readers interested in my words 😊

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