She’s My Moon

Countless wars rage inside her head
As she’s destined for another sleepless night.
Yet she gently smiles even when she feels dead
For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight.

She dazzles & decorates my sweetest dreams
While ignoring the pain of her plight.
On my dreams her seraphic aura streams
For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight.

She’s gracefully surreal, gentle & kind
& in my darkest hour, she’s my light.
She’s my guiding force whenever in the darkness I go blind
For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight
.

The light of infinite stars can’t match her luminous soul
Because her soul glows so blissfully bright.
Yet modestly, she makes me feel complete & whole
For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight.

Sometimes her heart breaks as she falls on her feet
Yet she sparkles & says she’s alright.
Like a crescent, she shines even while feeling incomplete
For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight.

She conquers her darkness, taking her sufferings in her stride
While she heals my scars being considerate & polite.
She’s my inspiration, she’s my pride
For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight.

Note: This poem is inspired by a particular friend of mine who is really close to me on an emotional level but I further extend this dedication to all the wonderful women who have graced my life with their understanding & kindness. I’ve used moon as a metaphor and as a symbol for kindness, gentleness & selfless love that a woman’s heart contains within it. Like the moon, I often feel that women(while playing various roles & carrying on with their responsibilities) outshine the darkness around them with the divine light that dwells within them. So this one poem is meant to highlight this angelic trait of women & I personally want to thank all my angels of mercy for inspiring me with their blissful brilliance. It is your selfless love & understanding, which has taught me that, one can shine even when they feel incomplete. ❀

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70 thoughts on “She’s My Moon

  1. Somehow, even when the well of kindness dries up, instead of walking away, we reach deeper into ourselves and seek out one more bright star to give. Dear, Sid, you have a gift for understanding the human nature inherent to most women and a heart that brims with compassion and thankfulness. Lucky the friend who inspired your ocean of beautiful words, lucky all the women you have extended your dedication to.

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    1. Nah I’m the fortunate one who feels blessed to be around such loving and caring angels of mercy. Thank you so much for the lovely feedback.πŸ™πŸ˜Š

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    1. It’s more like I’m lucky to have her & the other incredible women in my life (including yourself) who inspire me in their own unique way. Thank you for your readership and support β€οΈπŸ™‚

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      1. Guess we all are unique in our own selves aren’t we eccentric enigma? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜… But thanks for the compliment, it made me feel like a limited edition in my own respect πŸ˜…πŸ™

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  2. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece to all the women, after hearing the hypocritical and negative views towards women this inducement seems incredible. It’s adorable to feel the beauty of these words. ❀🌷🌷

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    1. Glad you remember the butterfly one too. πŸ˜… Women are poetic institutions in themselves so it’s rather easy to express them in terms of such metaphors and symbol. Thank you for your readership and support. πŸ™πŸ™‚

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    1. Yes I’m blessed to have her & the other wonderful women in my life (including you that is). You folks inspire me in your own respect. Thank you for your love and support. πŸ™πŸ™‚

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      1. You are always welcome, Sidharth.πŸ€—
        I am fine, till nowπŸ˜‚. And how have you been?
        Yeah! I have posted two poems recently. Shall I send you the link?🌟😍

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  3. I hope i can become similarly close πŸ™ˆ i just love when ppl can trust me with their worries and confide their stuff in me …πŸ™ˆ also love how you appreciate our nature as women! Thank you~! πŸ™ˆπŸŒΉπŸŒŸπŸ’

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  4. Yet she gently smiles even when she feels dead
    For she’s my moon, shining in broad daylight.

    Reading your work after a long time. And wow! It’s just as Beautiful.

    AMAZING work. The ending really touched. πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸŒ»

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  5. “Like a crescent, she shines even while feeling incomplete”
    This is heart touching indeed! The images your poetry painted and the feelings that it poured in my heart… Wow!
    How beautiful your moon looks you know, shining in broad daylight.πŸ’–

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